BFLA Open Week: Working on edits with your Agent

Written by Kate Burke

Every agent – and agency – is different and, ultimately, who you sign with has to be someone you click on a personal and professional level, and who you think will do the best by your writing and your career. Some agents work very closely editorially with clients and some don’t, but I’m not here to judge anyone! All I can say is that, as a former editor with a decade of experience working for several publishers, I do a lot of editorial work with my clients, particularly with debut writers, but this process can continue beyond that. This means working closely with them on several drafts of their novels before submitting them to publishers, helping them to shape outlines for future projects as well as brainstorming titles and pitch lines, and these are processes I really enjoy!

Whatever their style or experience, an agent should be hands on and work closely with you on your work. I remember what it was like, as an editor, to receive a submission from an agent – if it was a messy manuscript (both in terms of spelling and grammar, but also plot, character and pace), I could just tell that the agent hadn’t really worked on it and that really bothered me. Why hadn’t they taken the time to nurture and guide this writer? An agent should be your biggest advocate and what better way to present your work than to polish it and polish it until it’s editor-ready?

An example of working with a debut writer: once we’ve agreed that I’ll represent them, I will read their manuscript again and mark it up on screen with tracked changes. These changes could be comments about what I love or what’s working great along with all the things that might need a tweak or a bigger fix. In my email to that client, I will send them the marked-up Word document along with a summary of my main editorial concerns (these could be plot, pace, a certain character, some dialogue that doesn’t work, a scene that needs expanding etc) and then, once the author has processed my comments, we’ll have a call, Zoom or meeting to discuss tackling them and a timeframe for that. And the process continues until we’ve polished the manuscript enough that I think it’s ready for editors’ eyes! I will always do a final proofread on a manuscript before hitting the send button as I want the novel/proposal/outline to be as readable and polished as it can be.

While this sometimes rigorous (!) process might put the odd writer off, most writers who approach me for representation mention this close editorial eye and relationship as a positive, something they would like in an agent and I think it’s a vital part of developing a solid working relationship together. Agents have to sell projects with passion and, if we’ve worked for some time on a book, and we know it inside out, then we can do our best by that project. And the editorial work doesn’t stop with us – once you have an editor on board they will, most likely, ask you to do further edits on your book so I, personally, think it's best to be used to this process already so there are no curveballs further down the line!

BFLA OPEN WEEK: A Very Brief Guide to What an Agent Does

Written by Samuel Hodder

Before submitting a manuscript

An agent’s work begins with scouting for writing talent! This includes reading unsolicited submissions and creative writing anthologies, attending writers’ festivals and events by organisations which support emerging writers, and referrals from editors and colleagues. Sometimes, we proactively approach authors whose writing we admire, after discovering their journalism, or their website, or a self-published book, or even their social media.

We talk with the author about what they are looking for from an agent and what their hopes are for their writing career over the long-term. And we give the author a sense of our own preferred ways of working and what they can expect from a partnership. If we’re the right fit for each other, we clearly lay out our terms for working together in an agency agreement letter, which both the author and agent sign.

The next step is editorial work, in which the author and agent will work together to get the manuscript is the best possible shape before submitting to publishers. This usually has two stages. First, structural (or developmental) edits, which looks at the manuscript as a whole and how well its parts fit together and serve the central narrative. For a novel, questions of plot, pacing, perspective, characterisation and themes will be considered here. The agent’s knowledge of the publishing landscape and what editors are currently looking for can feed into these conversations.

Next comes a line (or language) edit, which looks at the way language is used to communicate the story at the level of the sentence. The word choice, tone, clarity and sharpness of the writing will all be discussed during the line edit.

A novel nearly always needs to be fully-written before being submitted to publishers (this is especially for debut authors). But non-fiction books can often be sent to publishers as a proposal, which includes an overview, a detailed chapter plan, and a writing sample of around 10,000 words.

Finding a publishing deal

From the first time an agent reads a manuscript, they will start to think about which editors and imprints would be a great fit for the book, and they’ll begin to pitch it to editors in meetings. Our goal is to get editors excited to read it! At the time of submission, agents will send out the manuscript over email, together with a submission letter. This letter will succinctly describe the book, tell the editor which rights are available, and a little about the author. The letter will also suggest a few comparison titles (or ‘comps’) – these are published titles by other authors which the book might fairly be compared with, to help give the editor a sense of where the book would fit within the publishing marketplace.

When an editor makes an offer for a book, an agent will inform all the other editors who have it, and this is often the point when an agent will set a deadline for receiving offers. If a number of editors make offers, the agent (after speaking to the author) could choose to hold an auction. An auction isn’t an in-person event, but instead takes place over email and phone calls. The agent decides the number of auction rounds, and in each one the publisher must at least match the highest offer made during the previous round, or drop out. The agent’s goal is to encourage the publishers to offer a higher advance each time. The agent also seeks to get publishers to offer for the same package of rights. When selling a book to a UK publisher, an agent will typically try to sell the rights to publish the book in English in the UK and Commonwealth countries. But larger rights packages are also possible, including ‘World English’ (the right to publish in English throughout the world), and simply ‘World’, (the right to publish in all languages throughout the World).

The last auction round is called ‘best and final’, in which publishers are asked to provide their very best terms, including in their royalty rates – the percentage an author receives on each sale of a book. The agent also asks publishers to provide information on how they will market and publicise the book on publication, and for any commitments the publisher can make for this. If possible, the agent will arrange in-person meetings between the author and the publishing teams, to receive more information and give the author a sense of the team they could be working with on their book.  

At the end of an auction, the agent presents the publishers’ best and final offers to their author and the author makes their choice. The agent will offer clear advice, but ultimately it is always the author’s choice to make. They do not have to accept the offer from the publisher that offered the highest advance, and can consider a wide range of factors – for e.g. the publisher’s editorial vision for the book, their sense of the editor’s enthusiasm for it, the plans for marketing and publicity, etc.

 After an offer is accepted

When the author makes their choice, the agent accepts a publisher’s offer on the author’s behalf. It is accepted ‘subject to contract’, which means the author can later withdraw if mutual agreement isn’t reached on all the aspects of a publishing contract. The agent will have asked the publisher to provide their major terms when making their offer, but there can still be finer points to agree at contract drafting stage – a publishing agreement typically has more than twenty sections. The goal of the publishing agreement is to lay out both parties’ rights and responsibilities and provide clarity on what to expect throughout the publishing process.

While the contract is being finalised, the editor will start to draw up their editorial notes, and send these to the author. The agent will ensure the author feels comfortable and confident about the editorial work requested.

Months before publication day, the agent will ask the publisher for their detailed plans for marketing and publishing the book, and schedule meetings between the author and the publisher. As well as the editor, we will seek contributions from other members of the publishing team, including the marketing manager and publicity manager, and perhaps sales managers as well. Opportunities for bookshop events, writers’ festivals, digital marketing and promotions, traditional media coverage, social media and more will all be discussed. The list of people (for e.g. authors, reviewers, influencers) who will receive a proof of the book ahead of publication will be agreed upon.

One especially exciting discussion is over the cover design! Usually, the publisher will present a number of designs to the author for their feedback and input, although the final decision is typically the publishers. If the publisher holds audio rights, the choice of narrator will be discussed too, and the author could have the opportunity to listen to audio samples by different narrators.

After publication

Shortly before publication, the agent will ask the publisher to confirm the number of orders received for the book from major book retailers. The agent will ask for further sales updates in the weeks following publication, and discuss marketing and publicity activities in the context of the plans. At the end of each six-month royalty period, the agent will ensure the publisher provides a detailed royalty statement, giving the figures for unit sales and income for each edition of the book. If money is due to the author, the agency will collect this on behalf of the publisher and promptly pay this onward to the author.

And then it’s…on to the next book!

BFLA OPEN WEEK: DEMYSTIFYING MONEY

Written by Juliet Pickering

Money – and the earning of it as an author – is still a mysterious business. Maybe that’s partly because earnings can vary hugely from author to author, and book to book, so there really is no One Size Fits All. An agent will not know how much an author is guaranteed to earn on their first or next books (although they might be able to take an informed guess!) or throughout their career, at the point they begin working together with an author. There are so many variables (more on those later) that it’s usually impossible for an agent to say, ‘this book will earn us millions/peanuts!’. But as agents we are very aware that all of us have bills to pay, and we want to support our authors earning as much as possible.

In the world of non-fiction, there are often more tangible factors to support an advance for a book: the idea itself and how ‘of the moment’ it is – and, of course, the author’s platform as expert on the topic, if relevant: i.e. does the author come with a ready-built audience or following that might translate to book sales, which publishers can factor in when offering. But for fiction it can be hard to estimate potential earnings from the outset.

An author can have many avenues for income, and an agent works to support and increase those (see Roya’s piece on rights). Most authors will not only earn from their book deals but also from some of the following: TV/film/radio/theatre, events (speaking, panels, chairing), teaching, mentoring, judging competitions, writing articles for press and online platforms, and sometimes from brand endorsement.

As agents, we usually start earning for our authors with the sale of their first book to a publisher, most commonly in the UK. To give you an idea of the structure of a book deal and how you might earn from it (a very general idea! There are more detailed breakdowns on the Society of Authors’ website) let’s start at the beginning, and on home turf (in the UK!):

Once an author and their agent have worked on either a novel or non-fiction book idea to the point when it’s ready to submit to publishers, the book heads out on submission and money conversations kick off when a first offer is made by an editor.

An editor will usually let an agent know they’re keen on the book as soon as they’ve read it (or the proposal), and after circulating the book with colleagues to get their vote of confidence too, will take the book to an Acquisitions Meeting (held weekly at most publishers) to get sign off on offering from the many other people that matter: Sales, Marketing, Publicity, Digital, Audio, Production, and more; at smaller and/or independent publishers, decisions on whether to offer for a book might be taken by one or two individuals, instead, but with similar concerns in mind. Agents will use anything possible in their armoury to suggest the book is a potentially good earner, e.g. we will use the most favourable comparison titles in our submission letter to editors, to indicate to their sales team that this is going to fly, e.g ‘It’s THE THURSDAY MURDER CLUB meets Jack Reacher’!

If the editor has the nod from all the relevant people in-house, they then go and look at £££ – often these take the form of predicted profit and loss sheets based on sales of similar published books, and likely costs of production – and cost up a financial offer for the agent and author. Traditionally, the editor then sends an agent ‘the offer’, i.e. the advance they’re willing to pay for the book, and the deal memo to break down the key terms of a proposed contract.

Deal memos usually include the following:

  •  The grant of rights to the publisher: are they buying UK and Commonwealth rights to publish the book, and is that including or excluding Canada (a key market for the US publishers, so we tend to hold it back if separating out US rights), or is the offer for World English language rights (excluding translation), or World All Language rights (every country around the world, including translation rights)?

  •  The main royalties the author will be earning on sales of the book in the UK, across print and e-book editions, and sometimes audiobook too.

  •  The key sub-rights earnings, eg if the book is sold to a third party such as newspapers for extracts, or large print publishers for production of a LP edition into libraries. Most commonly there are splits on sub-rights sales that start at 50/50 and increase from there, e.g. if your UK publisher sold Large Print rights to a third-party large print publisher, you might see 60% of that advance payment paid to you under the terms of your contract and set against your advance, and your publisher would keep 40%

  •  The advance and how it will be broken down into instalments. For example, if I receive a final and best offer of £10,000 for a novel next week (the 3rd week of March), here’s how those payment stages might look:

    Your 1st instalment will be paid on signature of the contract - once your agent has accepted an offer (subject to contract) on your behalf, it may then take a couple of months for the contract to be passed back-and-forth between publisher and agency, who often have a template agreement but might still negotiate or fine-tune your own contract until it’s ready for signature. In some cases, a substantial contract (American contracts can often run to 40 pages!) may take several months to get to signature stage. Let’s hope for a smooth conversation here and estimate signature in mid-May. Payment: £2,500, end May/early June 2022

    Your 2nd instalment will be paid on delivery and acceptance of your book. Although you will have an official delivery date in your contract, the exact timing of the release of your delivery advance can differ from publisher to publisher, and book to book: for many, the ‘acceptance’ stage may come when you have edited your book with your publisher to an almost final stage. For some (non-fiction) books, you may have to wait until the book has been read and approved by a legal team, or if you’re quoting a lot from other texts then you may need to wait for permissions for those quotes to have been cleared. For a few, your delivery advance might be paid not long after you first send the book to your editor: this is usually the privilege of more established authors who deliver and edit dependably! It’s generally understood that your book will be more-or-less ready to go to the printer at the point the delivery advance is released by your publisher.

    Let’s imagine in this case that the publisher wished to publish in spring 2024. In which case, the author might deliver an edited manuscript of the novel within a few months of signing their contract, it could go back-and-forth a couple more times, then be sent to a copy-editor and the advance instalment released at the point where the text is near-final. Payment: £2,500 December 2022

    Your 3rd instalment will be paid on first publication: whether hardback, paperback or electronic edition, your publication advance should be due to you as soon as your book first goes on sale. If this book is a debut novel, then publishers will often prefer a long lead time pre-publication in which to send out copies and get buzz going around the book, the lead time being the period between a first widely-shareable copy of the text and first publication date. So, in 2023 there may be no further income on this deal from the UK publisher, while proof copies of the novel are being sent out to generate excitement for the book and get anticipation growing ahead of spring 2024 publication. Payment on publication of hardback: £2,500, March 2024

    If there is a 4th instalment, it is most commonly paid on publication of a second edition, i.e. if you’ve had a hardback copy of your book published first, a paperback edition might follow 9-12 months later. Let’s assume here that paperback publication is spring 2025. Payment on publication of paperback: March 2025.

As your agent, we work to ensure that you’re paid as much as possible, and we discuss the payment stages with you at the point that publishers are offering so you have a realistic sense of when you will receive income from your book deal.

This is how your (UK) book deal might take a couple of years or more to pay out its full advance. As soon as the book goes on sale it will be earning royalties on every copy sold, which start chipping away at the £10,000 paid to you by the publisher. An advance is all yours to take and run with, once you’ve been paid it, but it stands as a figure to earn back via sales once your book is out in the world: put bluntly, this book will need to earn £10k via hardback, paperback, e-book, audio, and other methods, before you see any further income paid to you from your publisher. It’s still the case that most books won’t earn out their advances for a while after publication, if at all.

I appreciate that this isn’t exactly cheering news… So, in the meantime, we look to other revenue streams for our authors. We will try to sell many of our authors’ books into the US, too. It’s obvious that there is a big and healthy readership there, although we can sometimes be stymied by our books being deemed ‘too British’ or ‘too local’, meaning that not every book will work for an American readership. For instance, a beautifully-written grief memoir should be able to strike a note for readers everywhere, but the US will have scores of their own writers covering this topic too.

Our fantastic rights agents take our books overseas and press them into the hands/inboxes of editors around the world who might translate and publish them. Those additional deals in, for example, France, Japan, Brazil, Croatia and many more, will help to top up an author’s income and those deals can come at the most unexpected and welcome of times.

If the UK publisher doesn’t insist on taking audio rights off the table along with print (and many do), there might be the opportunity to place those with an independent audio publisher. Perhaps we could option film or TV rights, or even consider whether the book might work on stage. In a best-case scenario, we might be able to find our author and their book UK, US, audio and translation publishers, and sell TV/film rights to a production company. These advances would be paid out differently (translation and audio publishers often pay 50/50 on signature and publication; an option fee is paid in full upon signature of the contract), meaning further income for authors.

 And on those variables I mentioned earlier, here’s why income can be so unpredictable for our authors:

  •  Publishing schedules

    We publish books into our own publishing seasons, as a general rule (certainly at the larger publishers): new fiction will arrive from Feb-July; self-help in January; most of the big names (John Grisham/Nigella) in autumn, when they can cut through the busy pre-Christmas period. So, a decision about when your book is published – and you receive your publication advance – will be made according to the time of year it’s likely to receive best publicity, and can fit into a publisher’s schedule of the many other books they will be publishing that year.

  •  Genre
    An author may be publishing more than one book a year – for example, if writing romantic fiction and publishing a summer novel and a Christmas novel, like Sue Moorcroft. In that case, the author might be paid 2 x delivery and 2 x publication advances per year (+ signature advance if it’s a year there’s a new multi-book deal!)

  •  Mid-list authors
    If an author has been published before, it can be more of a challenge to find them a new publisher, and if their sales haven’t been high then the likely offers on a new book will be lower. However, an author can be successful elsewhere in the world while their books sell more slowly in the UK, so there may be healthier income from a translation publisher.

  •  Pandemics

    It’s perhaps unsurprising to learn that the Covid pandemic affected book sales hugely, and this has had a knock-on effect for authors and their income. Previously healthy retailers for books had to close or reduce their book stock – here and overseas – and we’ve yet to see high street and supermarket book-buying return to former levels, even though books have been selling in greater number as a whole. Unfortunately though, certain books and authors did suffer from being published during lockdowns etc., and there’s no doubting that their income was diminished as a result.

  •  Multi-book deals

    Sometimes we’re selling more than one book to a publisher, meaning that the signature advance will account for two or more books at once being signed up, and an author’s income is a better-known quantity across the life of the contract. There are pros and cons to signing a multi-book deal as an author and agent, but if it looks like the best thing to do at the point of signing up the first book, then we’ll be setting out your income across an even longer period, and this can offer a tiny bit of stability for authors, in the short term.

It’s worth remembering as a final point that an agent takes commission on the deals they broker for you so for each advance payment the author receives, as a general rule their agent is taking 15% commission in the UK and 20% commission from any overseas deal (standard commission rates for UK-based literary agents). To make this absolutely clear: you should NOT be paying any ‘fees’ to an agent to represent you, we work on a commission-only basis. If you’re approached by an agent who suggests otherwise, it might be worth referring to the Association of Authors’ Agents to check they’re a member/legit.

I hope this piece is helpful: it’s tricky to try and cover all the nuances of an author’s earnings in one (overly-long!) post, but you’re welcome to pose us more questions about this online in our #AskAgent #BFLAOpenWeek sessions on Twitter. And, as an author, the best you can do for yourself is ask an agent questions about money from the very first meeting. As I say, we won’t be able to give you figures and dates at that point, but we will be able to talk you through how hard we will work to earn for you, and the potential extra revenue streams we predict could be successful. Remember: we don’t earn until you do, so we want that income just as much!

24 (+15) hours in Kampala with Commonwealth Writers

Juliet Pickering reports on her whirlwind visit to Uganda for the Commonwealth Short Story Prize.

Thursday 12th 

Readers, I took that seat

Readers, I took that seat

2.30pm: Sat on the plane next to a guy who looks about 12, who tells me he's on a Christian mission to Uganda. He's American, has never left even his state before, and seems pretty scared of what's ahead. I re-read the shortlisted stories before we watch Frozen in friendly silence until a fellow missionary comes along and takes the mickey out of him for watching a girly film. Not very Christian, to say the least. 

 Two disgusting plane meals later...

 10.30pm I get out of the airport to find my transfer, and realise that there were six other people on the plane that Commonwealth Writers have brought over too. Hooray! We all pile into a large taxi with our cases teetering dangerously over our heads, and head to the hotel.

 11.30pm I'm sharing an apartment with Vimbia Shaire, a freelance editor who is teaching workshops the following week. She's chatty and lovely, and despite the lack of proper milk in the apartment and therefore being unable to drink a good cup of tea, we have a lengthy chat about all things publishing; often working with more academic titles, her experience is very different to mine.

It's good, but it's not P G Tips

It's good, but it's not P G Tips

Friday 13th 

8am I peruse the selection of exotic breakfast dishes: baked beans, curried vegetables, chips, chicken foot... Yup, chicken foot: in breadcrumbs. It's not bad, and goes well with the cassava wedges. 

Breakfast, avec pied

Breakfast, avec pied

I get chatting to Myn Garcia, Deputy Director of the foundation, who delicately nibbles a bit of fruit while I scoff my chicken foot and explain what I'm doing there. I get the sense that the Commonwealth Writers people (especially Lucy Hannah and Emma D'Costa) take on a hell of a workload, and travel a huge amount to promote literature and work with writers all over the world. An incredible and varied job to have, although exhausting.

 Lucy asks me to join them for a non-fiction workshop at midday, to talk about the UK publishing industry and the role of the agent.

 10am I wander the compound but it's fairly self-contained. It alternately rains like crappery and then the sun shines hot and strong. No chance to park myself by the pool and read The Miniaturist, damn it!

 11am I am taken to the hotel where the workshops are being held, and introduced to a group of non-fiction writers - who have come from Rwanda, Uganda, Tanzania, Malawi and Kenya - and who are being taught by Ellah Allfrey (Chair of the Commonwealth Short Story Prize) and Mark Gevisser. David Godwin also shows up, as he's in town for literary events the following week.

Non-fiction workshopping

Non-fiction workshopping

We are asked about the role of agents in the UK, and when we want to see material etc. We're reminded about how different things are in the Ugandan/East Africa publishing world, when we're asked a lot about book ideas being stolen by unscrupulous publishers. I mean publishers are unscrupulous the world over, obviously (to any publishers reading this - love you guys!), but the writers' concerns were about them telling a publisher their non-fiction ideas at an early stage, and the publisher then taking that idea and publishing that book with someone else. I got the impression that the publishing world is pretty corrupt there. It might be related to the fact that there are no agents, of course.

 1am LUNCH. I eat shredded goat and it is surprisingly delicious. We also chat to the writers who are all kinds of interesting. There are quite a few political memoirists: writers who have suffered because of their political beliefs, or who have lost family/home/identity in genocide. Their experiences are varied and fascinating.

 I also meet Billy Kahora from the Kwani Trust, a literary charity based in Kenya "dedicated to developing quality creative writing and committed to the growth of the creative industry through the publishing and distribution of contemporary African writing".

 3pm I do a podcast interview for the Commonwealth Writers website, with top Dos and Don'ts when submitting to agents.

 4pm Back in our room, Vimbai and I are peckish and order some food. You would only have believed the size of the chocolate cake I was brought if I'd taken a photo instead of greedily attacking it immediately. One word: BRICK. Good to know that giant hunks of cake are enjoyed the world over.

 6pm Having donned our party frocks, Ellah, Vimbai and I head to the Short Story Prize party.

Photocall for the non-fiction writers

Photocall for the non-fiction writers

After an hour of drinks, canapes and chat by the poolside (tough life) – during which I learn that to be 34 and unmarried means I am an ANCIENT SPINSTER in Uganda; I so enjoyed my conversations with the writers about their lives - Romesh Gunesekera announces Jennifer Makumbi as the winner of the Commonwealth Short Story Prize 2014, for her story about a Ugandan woman living in Britain, whose husband dies unexpectedly, leading her to discover he has been leading a double life with a second family in Uganda. She's a worthy winner, and you can read her story on the Granta website here.

Jennifer reads an extract of her winning story

Jennifer reads an extract of her winning story

At 9pm I dash to my room to change, and go to reception to wait for a taxi to the airport. Mike van Graan stops by and we introduce ourselves.

 9.30pm INSANE drive to the airport. The roads are packed, mostly with tiny scooters carrying three people, zooming lethally between traffic. I try not to wince as scooters regularly scrape our car bonnet. This was one of the best bits of the trip: 90mins of cruising through Kampala as people gathered at roadsides to eat from smoking food stalls, gather round a tiny TV or sell gum and nuts to passing cars (my lovely driver bought me a pack of Juicy Fruit as we sat in a long queue). Because you can't walk around town whenever and wherever you like, this was the closest I got to seeing Kampala. And it's worth noting that if you own a new and/or large car in Kampala, you can turn your lights on full beam and drive along the wrong side of the road and everyone will get out of your way because they're in awe of your amazing car *eyeroll*. 

 1am It's announced that the plane is grounded because it's been struck by lightning on the way in, and BA have to check it over before we fly again. No argument from me! Check that mofo twice!

 2am The one hour delay becomes a 15hr delay, and so ensues a long night/day of shunting around from airport to hotel to airport to plane. But despite this, it's been totally worth it.

 Follow-up: I've recently emailed some of the shortlisted writers from all over the Commonwealth; stories I particularly enjoyed included one about a young girl’s friendship with a gardener that’s destroyed by racial tensions; another which told of a teenager dealing with coming of age and the calm wisdom her grandmother could offer her; and a third about a brief, meaningful but then discarded love affair in Paris. I'll begin talking to the authors about their writing and what they're working on, in the hopes that some good fiction might come my way as a result!

 I'm really pleased that this trip introduced me to two groups of writers who might not usually think to submit to a UK agent. This is exactly what I hoped for when we began the association with Commonwealth Writers last year, and huge thanks are due to Emma, Lucy, Keenda and the brilliant team there, for making this happen and taking me along to Uganda.